Already Too Late Weekend Writing Warriors

WeWrWa(If you’re here for the Blue Moon Blog hop, go HERE.)

Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…a fun way to sample new books and find new authors! (Also welcome to the Sunday Snippet visitors!)

Since LADY OF THE STAR WIND is still my newest release – and doing quite well, thank you to all the Warriors for your support! – I’ll keep going with excerpts from the scene we’ve been pursuing here.

Lady of the Star WindFinal-FJM_High_Res_1800x2700From  about 1/4 of the way into the novel: Sandy was bitten by a snake named Sherabti, went into the green light with a woman unknown to her and found herself sitting in a room she’s never seen before, with four women who seemed to think Sandy was someone else…the Lady of the Star Wind…A new player, Haatrin, entered the chamber and scolded the Moon Sisters, after which an even more senior goddess, Nuet, arrived to scold them ALL and sent the Moon Sisters fleeing. I’ve skipped a few sentences between our last on from this book and today’s. (Nakhtiaar is what the local residents call this area of the planet.):

“You must have a warrior, a consort, if you are to be the Lady,” Haatrin said, her tone firm. “But this Mark you speak of doesn’t have to be the one. You can choose another, a warrior of Nakhtiaar perhaps. What matters is your choice.” Leaning forward, she touched a fingertip to Sandy’s chest above her heart. “Your choice here.” Retreating, she drank from her own glass.

“How much time do I have to decide? To see if things can be worked out with us?”

“You’re already too late for some possibilities,” Haatrin said.

The story:

Are they merely luckless lovers … or a legend come back to life?

Mark Denaltieri, ex-Sector Special Forces, has been hired by the Outlier Empress to rescue her granddaughter, Princess Alessandra, from kidnappers. Since the Empress once had him tortured and banished, she’s the last person Mark wants to work for. But he takes the job. He’ll save Alessandra, his first love, and discover why she didn’t speak for him when he desperately needed her. Then he’ll be on his way, finally free of his past.

Alessandra would rather her rescuer was anyone but Mark–after all, he let her believe he was dead all this time. But when the couple are forced to flee her captors by Traveling via a strange crystal globe, they find themselves in a lovely Oasis on a desert planet, the old attraction sizzling between them again.

They soon discover they are far from alone. The Oasis holds the entrance to another world, one in which the inhabitants are convinced Sandy and Mark are the Lady of the Star Wind and her Warrior, come to free them from an evil Queen.

Mark and Sandy must work together to unearth an ancient mirror, and crown the true king of this land.  Can they fulfill the prophecy of the Lady and her Warrior … and this time, will their love survive the test?

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35 comments on “Already Too Late Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. Oh, I’m curious to find out what she decided now that she had a choice. But, it sounds like she hasn’t given up on Mark. Congrats on the success of this book!

    • Well what Haatrin means (which I know since I wrote it LOL) is that as Sandy goes through life on this new planet, she could decide not to fix her relationship with Mark, and to fall in love with someone else she meets. Haatrin has no specific guy in mind. It was to make clear to Sandy that although she will be the owner of the Mirror and needs a Consort (later in the book that gets explained), it does NOT have to be Mark.

  2. Ooh! You had me at the blurb. Love the sound of this, Veronica! Very much enjoyed this particular line: Leaning forward, she touched a fingertip to Sandy’s chest above her heart. “Your choice here.” – Wonderful work!

  3. So glad the book is doing well!! Too late for some possibilities…hmmm, makes me wonder! But “this Mark”…if he doesn’t have to be the one, I wonder what he’d do if she started browsing for another. Great snippet. 🙂

  4. I almost never read sci fi/space novels, because I get so confused so easily. LOL! This is a great snippet, however, and the premise is enticing. I have to add it to my Goodreads! Thanks for sharing!

    • Thanks! I try not to go too deep into the hard science fiction in any of my books because I’m mostly interested in the adventure and the characters, whether with romance or romantic elements.

  5. I think this pretty much makes it clear that Sandy wouldn’t object to Mark as her Warrior.

    I’m intrigued. So many great books on my Kindle; so many words to write…

    Not a ba sort of problem to have, really. =)

  6. Already too late… Oh well there’s a hook, line, and sinker of a twist! I wonder what she means by that. What possibilities? Nicely done, can’t wait to find out what she means.

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