We’re Going To Make A Run For It Weekend Writing Warriors

WeWriWa buttonHere’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…A fun way to sample new books and find new writers!

We’re onto a new story of mine, a WIP that still needs a lot of work. Mark, an ex-Special Forces soldier in the Sectors, has been hired by the Outlier Empress to rescue a kidnap victim who’s been taken to the border planet Freemarket, where anything goes and the authorities are usually hands off. Kind of like Las Vegas…he’s broken into the kidnapper’s house, persuaded Alessandra to go with him and now they’re fleeing in a stolen car, pursued by the bad guys (Kliin is the leader) and the planetary police…Mark is speaking:

“Local cops. Damn, I was hoping they’d stay out of this like they usually do. Kliin must have paid them one hell of a lot of money to be at his beck and call. We’re going to have to ditch the car and make a run for it.” He took his attention off the road for a moment, to assess how Alessandra was holding up.

            She screamed a warning but even Mark’s reflexes weren’t fast enough to avoid a collision with the cargo hauler pulling into his lane. The groundcar rammed the side of the truck, the safety mechanisms deploying instantly and then retracting.

“Where the seven hells did you learn to drive, pal?” demanded the truck driver as he half fell from his vehicle.

There’s a lot of backstory between Mark, Kliin and Alessandra (not revealed in an info dump, I promise), a lot of adventures to come for Mark and ‘Sandy’…I might try to get this finished in 2015. I’ll probably do a few weeks of excerpts from this scene, see what you all think…

As an aside, I mention the Outlier empire and its Empress in passing in my other books, so I thought it’d be fun to bring a bit of that other galactic civilization into the mix.

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26 comments on “We’re Going To Make A Run For It Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. He learned to drive in a place where the laws of physics have opinions about merging two vehicles into the same space at the same time. 😀

    Just what they need during a chase scene, and just what I needed this morning. Thanks, Veronica! 🙂

  2. Love the pace and action in this. I felt really tense reading it and it was only a few lines, so WOW, great writing!! I’m looking forward to more from this scene and this MS through 2015

  3. You’re very talented with setting. I can picture everything when I read your scenes, like I’m there. Looks like Mark has some explaining to do!

    Keep smiling,
    Yawatta

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