What’s Following Us? DANCER OF THE NILE Weekend Writing Warriors

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A fun way to sample new books and find new writers! Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants.

???????????????????????????????This is my final excerpt from this paranormal romance set in Ancient Egypt. Nima the dancer and Kamin, one of Pharaoh’s warriors, have been traveling with the caravan for a few days as they seek to escape the pursuing enemy and get vital information to Pharaoh to stop an invasion. Nima was exposed to various temptations involving her future as a dancer and Kamin realized how much she means to him. But he’s got secrets he can’t share…they’ve quarreled, made up and then some (it’s in the book)… the caravan has now stopped, which is totally unheard of and signals danger.

This snippet follows directly after last week’s excerpt, as Kamin and Nima flee the caravan. Artistic punctuation warning (and a run-on sentence or two)!:

 They hiked, soon increasing their speed to an easy run, Kamin holding his pace to hers.

               Every couple of minutes, he checked the empty landscape behind them, walking backward for eight or nine paces, scanning the horizon.

                After the fifth time he performed this ritual, Nima challenged him, “What’s wrong?”

                Frowning, he said, “I can’t shake the feeling something is following us. Even if we haven’t heard howling for a few minutes now.”

                Eyes wide, she glanced at the horizon behind them, saying as she did so, “Why would anything follow us, except for the Hyksos?”

               He rolled his shoulders and said, “I don’t know – the common predators out here on the open desert should be afraid to tangle with humans, at least in broad daylight.”

              Cutting across his words was a definite howl, from more than one animal’s throat. 

I have to say I’m now thinking about a sequel for these two! I don’t know what I’ll share next week, maybe the new book, Magic of the Nile, which will be out in March, or perhaps a science fiction romance I’m working on…

The story for DANCER OF THE NILE:

Egypt, 1500 BCE

DancerOfTheNile_1600x2400Nima’s beauty and skill as a dancer leads an infatuated enemy to kidnap her after destroying an Egyptian border town. However, she’s not the only hostage in the enemy camp: Kamin, an Egyptian soldier on a secret mission for Pharaoh, has been taken as well. Working together to escape, the two of them embark on a desperate quest across the desert to carry word of the enemy’s invasion plans to Pharaoh’s people.

As they flee for their lives, these two strangers thrown together by misfortune have to trust in each other to survive.  Nima suspects Kamin is more than the simple soldier he seems, but she finds it hard to resist the effect he has on her heart.  Kamin has a duty to his Pharaoh to see his mission completed, but this clever and courageous dancer is claiming more of his loyalty and love by the moment. Kamin starts to worry, if it comes to a choice between saving Egypt or saving Nima’s life…what will he do?

Aided by the Egyptian god Horus and the Snake Goddess Renenutet, beset by the enemy’s black magic, can Nima and Kamin evade the enemy and reach the safety of the Nile in time to foil the planned attack?

Can there ever be a happy future together for the humble dancer and the brave Egyptian soldier who is so much more than he seems?

DANCER OF THE NILE, an Amazon Best Seller, is AVAILABLE on Amazon   Barnes & Noble   All Romance eBooks iTunes   Smashwords   Google Play

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29 comments on “What’s Following Us? DANCER OF THE NILE Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. Yikes! Thanks for leaving us hanging here…you are a cruel literary mistress…dangling words above our heads that fill us with tension and worry…and then you tease us with new delights to come…I’m leaning towards some sensuous sci-fi, but your take on Egypt is always delightful!!!!

  2. I’ve so enjoyed each and every excerpt you’ve shared from this story, Veronica! Thank goodness I have my own copy so I can get my fill. Can’t wait to see what adventure you’ll take us on next! 🙂

  3. Must be uncommon predators, then!

    I’m glad I already read (and loved) this book, or I’d be terrified for them . . . Though I remember this bit well enough to still be worried! 🙂

  4. I do feel badly, stopping the snippets from Dancer with this week, but I love these characters and going back to them every week to pull an excerpt is distracting me seriously from the WIP and the next book after that LOL. Because as I mentioned last week, now it’s got me thinking of Kamin & Nima sequels and I already have a full plate for awhile. My next Egyptian novel is at the copy editor and I writing a new SFR…..

    • I think I’ll have to revisit them LOL. I can’t picture Nima and Kamin just living quietly till old age after all this adventure. And then of course there’s Renenutet the snake goddess, who may just have something she wants done and they owe her…oh heavens, here come the plot bunnies now! I hope you enjoy the book, thanks!

  5. Oh my, if I hear ANYthing howl tonight, I’m going to hide under the covers. This was set up beautifully, the tension is so thick. Great 8.

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