Will He Apologize? DANCER OF THE NILE Weekend Writing Warriors

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Continuing on with my paranormal romance set in Ancient Egypt. Nima the dancer and Kamin, one of Pharaoh’s warriors, are traveling with the caravan for a few days as they seek to escape the pursuing enemy and get vital information to Pharaoh to stop an invasion. Nima is being exposed to various temptations involving her future as a dancer and Kamin realizes how much she means to him. But he’s got secrets he can’t share…

Today’s excerpt follows onto last week’s,  after the Minoan dance master Andrios provoked an argument between Kamin and Nima, after which she danced with the troupe, spending the night in their company, while Kamin kept a self-imposed watch over the area to be sure she was safe.  I’m skipping some further contemplation on Nima’s part and banter with the Minoan dancers. I’ll start with Kamin’s greeting to her. There’s been some editing and odd punctuation to meet the eight sentence rule.

Giving her a bow, as if she was some grand lady at Pharaoh’s court, he said, “One of the camels has given birth this morning, out of season, but the calf appears healthy.”

               Surprised by his choice of topic, she went along with it, “Is that the source of the delay in departure?”

                “Yes, Ptahnetamun doesn’t want to abandon a perfectly good camel, so we’ve waited for the mother to give birth. I—I thought you might like to come see the baby – it’s a cute little thing.” He rubbed the back of his neck as if suddenly uncomfortable with the notion.

                “I’d love to, thank you,” she said, pushing away from the stone wall, and they walked together out of the center of the oasis, down the caravan line.

                “I want to apologize for my words last night,” he said as soon as they were well away from the cluster of Minoans. “I never meant to spoil your pleasure in the dancing.” 

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So my plan is to share the rest of this conversation in snippets over the next two or three weeks and then perhaps leave you on an action cliffhanger (sorry, but the book IS available if you just have to know what happens next LOL!) and switch off to my new book, MAGIC OF THE NILE, which is in edits right now. Hopefully MAGIC will be out in February…

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DancerOfTheNile_1600x2400The story: 

Egypt, 1500 BCE

Nima’s beauty and skill as a dancer leads an infatuated enemy to kidnap her after destroying an Egyptian border town. However, she’s not the only hostage in the enemy camp: Kamin, an Egyptian soldier on a secret mission for Pharaoh, has been taken as well. Working together to escape, the two of them embark on a desperate quest across the desert to carry word of the enemy’s invasion plans to Pharaoh’s people. 

As they flee for their lives, these two strangers thrown together by misfortune have to trust in each other to survive.  Nima suspects Kamin is more than the simple soldier he seems, but she finds it hard to resist the effect he has on her heart.  Kamin has a duty to his Pharaoh to see his mission completed, but this clever and courageous dancer is claiming more of his loyalty and love by the moment. Kamin starts to worry, if it comes to a choice between saving Egypt or saving Nima’s life…what will he do?

Aided by the Egyptian god Horus and the Snake Goddess Renenutet, beset by the enemy’s black magic, can Nima and Kamin evade the enemy and reach the safety of the Nile in time to foil the planned attack?

Can there ever be a happy future together for the humble dancer and the brave Egyptian soldier who is so much more than he seems?

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39 comments on “Will He Apologize? DANCER OF THE NILE Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. I enjoy his discomfort…is that wrong? : ) Have been enjoying these two week after week. Will need to add to my reading list, since you are eventually leaving us dangling and drooling : )

    • I know, I feel so badly ending the excerpts from DANCER (but not for a few more weeks) but since it isn’t a serial, I really have to force myself to stop and switch to the newer book eventually!

  2. *lol* Yeah, where’s the baby camel??

    Even in these short excerpts, you manage to make them not only realistic but like we’re alongside the characters. I love that kind of immediacy and intimacy. Even though there’s nothing huge going on with this excerpt, it’s still a great little piece. Thanks for posting this!

  3. Such a great romance developing! I like that he kept an eye out for her safety. Okay, I just bought this one…couldn’t chance losing track of it. I don’t know when I’ll get to it. I don’t have any time to read right now. But I am looking forward to it!

    • TYVM, Teresa, I hope you’ll enjoy the book when you have a chance to read it. I wasn’t trying to pressure people but I have a bad habit of wanting to share ALL The Things here on the excerpts (so much fun every week) and it really isn’t meant to be a web serial LOL!

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